my poem... comment plz...

[yuriko]

please come back

I’m stock in the place where you left me

And still I’m standing here waiting for you to come back

I can’t move on from this spot

`Coz I’m hoping that someday you’ll come back again



I tried to go forward sometimes

But I always end up with this place where you left me

Knowing that one day you’ll come back and be mine again

But I guess I’m too stupid to think it that way



I never want to expect anymore

That you will hold my hand the way you always do

I want to stop from dreaming

That someday you’ll come back again into my arms



But no matter what I do

My heart desire’s is always you

And I know this time that I am really stupid

For no matter what happen I will always be here waiting for you to come
back.

[Randy Winter]

damn... lookin good ;)

[Lironster [RJA♥]]

It's great! :)

[karla robiso]

im proud that we are friends right?
coz your a dang GOOD POET!!!
hope i can right poem too....

[Eye Lean]

great!
awesome!
copyright 2008©
;-)

[yuriko]

tnx for the comments guyz....

i have lots of poem... well... maybe some other time i'll post it for you guys to see them...

[Jay]

i like it, its good.