its a sad story...

[Vince]

She had always liked him,
But never truly knew why He never talks to her,
His friends made her cry
She smiled at him in the hall,
He just turned his head ,
He didn't care about her, Is what he always said
But she kept her chin up, And loved him still Because she knew what was inside,
A hole that she could fill
His friends soon caught word, Of her feelings toward him
They found it hysterical, But her love did not dim
She slowly became more forlorn, Slipping deep into a hole
He was still ignoring her, Breaking her delicate soul But her love did not faulter,
She always thought of him
But all the rumors about her, Put her closer to the brim
On the final day, His friends played a trick Told her that he loved her,
Just to watch her tick Sadly she believed them,
And she was overjoyed Little did she know, It was all a ploy
She went up to him, To make sure that he knew She knew how he felt,
And that she loved him too
He did not understand, So all he did was stare
Telling her repeatedly, That he really didn't care
She was finally over the edge, She knew it could not be true
She thought they said he loved her,
But deep inside she knew She could not comprehend, How to go on living her life
So she went to the kitchen, And got the sharpest knife
She shrieked into the air, This is not how it should be
She screamed all the things, That she wished he would see
She spoke of her love, She cried of her pain She whispered of what happened,
How could it ever be the same? And with her last strength, She scribbled her final note
She explained everything, And this is what she wrote:
"Take the shining knife, and cut open my wrists Watch the blood flow out, It could've ended with a kiss
Take the bloody knife, Write words in my skin Tell me that you hate me,
Make the pain begin Take the knife and hold it up,
So that everyone can see That this is the pain, You have caused me"
She watched the blood pour out, Collapsing on the floor Little did she know,
He was at the door He did not get an answer,
As he screamed her name He told her he was sorry,
What he said was lame He did not want to give up,
He wanted her to know That he really did love her, Just didn't let it show He did not care about his friends,
They were not his anymore So please, won't you please, Open the damn door
He walked to the window, And saw her lying there
He pounded on the glass, Crying in despair He broke through the glass,
And knelt down on the floor Looking at the girl, He always had adored
Desperately calling for help, She was still alive He tried to bandage the wounds,
Please God, let her survive
He held her so close,
As the ambulance drew near
I really do love you, He whispered in her ear
Please don't give up,
I'll try to help you through
We will make it work,
You know I love you too...

[Vince]

dude this has been in my friendster for like 2 years as well :D

[King]

You make me wanna continue my story which has been in drafts for 2 years >_>

[Punkin']

this is amazing vincy!

[rose]

ha ha awesome dude kind of emo thou but i loved it :)<3<3<3<3<3<3

[xent]

..ah..emo story..its so sad

[Sara]

hmmmmm...great job emo boy!
i love it..looking forward to read more...
you're such a talented guy..charness!

[Spencer]

fucking amazing it made my eyes water you bastard lol.