Comments - A story I am working on. What do you think? - The Red Jumpsuit Alliance2024-03-28T18:35:18Zhttps://redjumpsuitalliance.ning.com/profiles/comment/feed?attachedTo=1523676%3ABlogPost%3A144629&xn_auth=noErr, just a suggestion. You c…tag:redjumpsuitalliance.ning.com,2009-01-28:1523676:Comment:1459892009-01-28T17:56:43.684ZKinghttps://redjumpsuitalliance.ning.com/profile/King
Err, just a suggestion. You could try not being too repetitive with the character names and uh, write longer sentences. Anyways, good luck with the story and keep writing! I write stories as a hobby or if I'm bored and I have a tendency not to finish my works.
Err, just a suggestion. You could try not being too repetitive with the character names and uh, write longer sentences. Anyways, good luck with the story and keep writing! I write stories as a hobby or if I'm bored and I have a tendency not to finish my works.